My Bleeding Flower, My first real poem

[MustafaMM]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

How're you everyone? Ramadan Mubark for you
I'm doing just fine, But busy with life.. so pardon my absence

Here I come again with a romantic poem that I wrote...
I actually wrote it in Ramadan while I was fasting lol



( My Bleeding Flower )


I once in my life had a flower of love that I did assassinate ..


I knew she was more fragile than a dove & even more abate

I cruelly got her out of her peaceful cage without a hesitate..

I so ironically thought I’m doing right thing as you never negotiate

I said I'm doing it for you but it truthfully was for me, I know I wasn’t accurate..

I abandoned the very emotionless fact & Set you free to be even more activate ..

I forgot & Then remembered when it was just a little too late..
I kept apologizing for you & You simply never agitate..

I asked you over & Over why...Why since you could evacuate..

I went telling you how tough the outside world is & I know I did exaggerate..

I was astonished by how simple your reply was : My love for you I'll tolerate..

I at that moment realized, up to what level you my flower can be passionate..

I am so sorry for everything..but you drove me insane with being so affectionate..

I no long am worth your love.. you cried saying that I'm the most appropriate..

I replied with a low full of tears & Sorrow's voice you'll find a better alternate..



Written by Mustafa

6:49 PM 9/19/2007

Hope you like it & Awaiting your sweet replies
And comments........

Yours
Mustafa

[anasserge]

nice poem one my dear but i thought it will be about ramadan so
would you right one for our E forum please ?:)r
and thanks a lot
ramadan mubarak for you to

[مستر حريقة]

;) Nice poem

:D ?You're not talking about your chicken are you


Ramadan Mubarak brother

[aliveZombie]

wow .... really without exaggeration ... it's amazing
i really liked the rhyme...
and te meanning of the words
amazing...
can't wait to read your next one
yours
aliveZombie