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    الموضوع: My Bleeding Flower, My first real poem

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      Post My Bleeding Flower, My first real poem

      السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

      How're you everyone? Ramadan Mubark for you
      I'm doing just fine, But busy with life.. so pardon my absence

      Here I come again with a romantic poem that I wrote...
      I actually wrote it in Ramadan while I was fasting lol

      ( My Bleeding Flower )

      I once in my life had a flower of love that I did assassinate ..

      I knew she was more fragile than a dove & even more abate

      I cruelly got her out of her peaceful cage without a hesitate..

      I so ironically thought I’m doing right thing as you never negotiate

      I said I'm doing it for you but it truthfully was for me, I know I wasn’t accurate..

      I abandoned the very emotionless fact & Set you free to be even more activate ..

      I forgot & Then remembered when it was just a little too late..
      I kept apologizing for you & You simply never agitate..

      I asked you over & Over why...Why since you could evacuate..

      I went telling you how tough the outside world is & I know I did exaggerate..

      I was astonished by how simple your reply was : My love for you I'll tolerate..

      I at that moment realized, up to what level you my flower can be passionate..

      I am so sorry for everything..but you drove me insane with being so affectionate..

      I no long am worth your love.. you cried saying that I'm the most appropriate..

      I replied with a low full of tears & Sorrow's voice you'll find a better alternate..


      Written by Mustafa

      6:49 PM 9/19/2007


      Hope you like it & Awaiting your sweet replies
      And comments........

      Yours
      Mustafa
      We're the next generation of this nation

      (( سبحان الله وبحمده عدد خلقه ورضى نفسه وزنة عرشه ومداد كلماته ))

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      رد: My Bleeding Flower, My first real poem

      nice poem one my dear but i thought it will be about ramadan so
      would you right one for our E forum please ?r
      and thanks a lot
      ramadan mubarak for you to
      سبحان الله و بحمده
      عدد خلقه
      ورضا نفسه
      و زنة عرشه
      و مداد كلماته
      سبحان الله و بحمده ... سبحان الله العظيم
      جرب هذا الرابط لن تندم ... صدقني لن تندم
      http://www.shbab1.com/2minutes.htm


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      رد: My Bleeding Flower, My first real poem

      Nice poem

      ?You're not talking about your chicken are you


      Ramadan Mubarak brother

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      رد: My Bleeding Flower, My first real poem

      wow .... really without exaggeration ... it's amazing
      i really liked the rhyme...
      and te meanning of the words
      amazing...
      can't wait to read your next one
      yours
      aliveZombie

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