Edge Rossman
30-05-2008, 11:14 PM
Hi every one,
I have a little talent in writing poetry, so i wanted to share some of my poems with you so that i can gain more experience by hearing out your opinions
i hope you like it
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The Rhyme
Every day, every night
Find my way to the light
Not too shiny, not too bright
But in the end, sit right
Listen to me, i'll start to rhyme
Don't stop me, it's not a crime
Express yourself, say what's inside
Confess every thing, don't try to hide
If i thought now, i'd like to say
I have a big dept, no one can pay
To stay in school, don't be a fool
Just study, 'cause buddy
It's the ultimate rule !
They say, it's really soon
But they, sleep the after noon
I stay, up late, just to hate my school, and i state
I've realized it too late !
like every one, i took the bait
i wont argue, it's my fate !
so again , let's start the rhyme
don't leave, not yet, it's not the time...
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i hope that this poem is good enough, so thank you very much for reading
I have a little talent in writing poetry, so i wanted to share some of my poems with you so that i can gain more experience by hearing out your opinions
i hope you like it
-----
The Rhyme
Every day, every night
Find my way to the light
Not too shiny, not too bright
But in the end, sit right
Listen to me, i'll start to rhyme
Don't stop me, it's not a crime
Express yourself, say what's inside
Confess every thing, don't try to hide
If i thought now, i'd like to say
I have a big dept, no one can pay
To stay in school, don't be a fool
Just study, 'cause buddy
It's the ultimate rule !
They say, it's really soon
But they, sleep the after noon
I stay, up late, just to hate my school, and i state
I've realized it too late !
like every one, i took the bait
i wont argue, it's my fate !
so again , let's start the rhyme
don't leave, not yet, it's not the time...
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i hope that this poem is good enough, so thank you very much for reading