مشاركة: The Life I killed
:biggthump coooooooooool
really I like it
t n x King
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You`re more than welcome " Barbi " and thanx for the post
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hello everyone
king>>>>>>>>thanks for the subjects
it's really nice and i was going to stop reading it in the middle for having so many things to do
but i couldn't leave it before finishing it
really thanks and allah ya3tik el3afieh
اختكم
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Hey Ms.Blueness
I don`t know what should I say about how life is
because as Robert francis said
Life the hound
Equivocal
Comes at a bound
Either to rend me
Or to befriend me.
I cannot tell
The hound's intent
Till he has sprung
At my bare hand
With teeth or tongue.
Meanwhile I stand
And wait the event.
So .. I guess i`m just waiting for the upcoming event
and hey.. don`t apologize for you`re fairly enjoyable reply
Thanks for passing by, now have a nice day
Hi, for islam
you`re welcome sis, and thanks for you`re nice reply
may Allah bless your soul
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nice story man
great word choice
...there is nothing really to criticize you for
I liked the flow of the story it’s really smooth you moved from a thought to another without any problem
:Dthe flashbacks are cool; the images you presented are beautiful it’s like watching a movie.. hey .. you’d make a good director
the only thing that I can think of to improve the story is to make it a little bit more detailed because it’s kind of ambiguous about the reason why he killed his friend
Keep it up man
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Lucifer, man.. why isn`t your reply showing on the page
you cunning devil :31:
thanx 7abibi for the lovely reply
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Em...I got a heavy heart when I finished reading .
Life is a struggle
life just likes shelling the onion,
there is awalys a slice cause ur tears.
ThQ for this wonderful story which make people think deeply
about the life.
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You're welcome Baheya.. glad u read it
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You're welcome brother.. I'm honoured to have you here
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ما شاء الله;)
اقتباس:
He raised his head, looking towards the moon through the barred hole
What I can say...??!
I think ...I can see that scene
it's close of my eyes now:أفكر:
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" Now son, can you say.. rabbit?.. "
" .. ra .. ra .. bit .. rabit .. "
" .. My dear child, today you`re going to school and you`ll play there with little boys like you .. "
"..mama..I don`t like school.."
touching piece:أفكر: it's
Really it's good & deep story;)
I like it and like U'r style...
U carry us too far by this great style & smart choice 2 words...........
I think U make a good point to move our feelings & our thoughts
Slowly to what U wanna say:أفكر:
Really Thanx to U
For this enjoyable story
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The blade rose , reflecting the sun original rays of light..
giving him the pleasant emancipation he was seeking .
I can imagine that....... :أفكر:
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Everytime I try to reply to you chipsa the page collapses without a proper reason
error report
anyway..
thank you for your generous words
and sorry for my short reply.. I don't have enough time right now
later
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[QUOTE=king_kubaj]
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Everytime I try to reply to you chipsa the page collapses without a proper reason
error report
that prOblem happen 2 all
may b the reason N my signature:33:
اقتباس:
thank you for your generous words
and sorry for my short reply.. I don't have enough time right now
later
not prOb my brOther
& gOd bless U
SalamOoOo^^