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Mama , you're so precious to me
You always wants the best for me
You're the candle that lights my way
You're the one who brights my day
Ain't nothin' gonna tear us apart
you're always gonna stay in my heart
:D Written By: Graciela
PLZ tell me ur opinion & don't be negative like most of the times :06:
coooooooooool
:05: thats really so much cooooool
nice feelings ,, dear
our moms r the most important person in life
:أفكر: may Allah bless them and protect them
thank u so much dear
Very nice although a bit short
You did a good job by not repeating the same letter for the whole poem which what proffesional people usually do
Keep up this spirit and we will wait for your next work
See ya
nice work sister
Ur words r just so great
thanx and waitting more ^^:o
:02: I know that it's short :أفكر: but most of my poems are just 4 linesاقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة H-Hunter
:09: so this is the longest one i've ever written
and I promise that I'll try my best 2 write long ones:biggthump
;)THANX EVERYBODY 4 RESPONDING :ciao:
wow wow
coooool
very beautiful words
my god bless my mother
thanx baby very gret word
and
see ya
God bless all the moms around the worldاقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dana_2005
and thanx honey 4 respondin:ciao: