Mama

[GRACIELA]

Mama , you're so precious to me

You always wants the best for me

You're the candle that lights my way

You're the one who brights my day

Ain't nothin' gonna tear us apart

you're always gonna stay in my heart


Written By: Graciela


PLZ tell me ur opinion & don't be negative like most of the times

[المكاويه]

coooooooooool
thats really so much cooooool
nice feelings ,, dear
our moms r the most important person in life
may Allah bless them and protect them
thank u so much dear

[H-Hunter]

Very nice although a bit short

You did a good job by not repeating the same letter for the whole poem which what proffesional people usually do

Keep up this spirit and we will wait for your next work

See ya

[مستر حريقة]

nice work sister

Ur words r just so great



thanx and waitting more ^^

[GRACIELA]

Very nice although a bit short

You did a good job by not repeating the same letter for the whole poem which what proffesional people usually do

Keep up this spirit and we will wait for your next work

See ya

I know that it's short but most of my poems are just 4 lines
so this is the longest one i've ever written
and I promise that I'll try my best 2 write long ones

THANX EVERYBODY 4 RESPONDING

[dana_2005]

wow wow
coooool
very beautiful words
my god bless my mother
thanx baby very gret word
and
see ya

[GRACIELA]

wow wow
coooool
very beautiful words
my god bless my mother
thanx baby very gret word
and
see ya

God bless all the moms around the world
and thanx honey 4 respondin