My Poetry

Hello everyone.
I want to share some of the poems that I write with all of you.
And I'm looking for comments and all, in order to improve. ^^

Keep in mind that, IF, this post interests you people, and I recieve enough replies, I'll keep updating it with new poems every now and then.

Enough with that, let's get this started with this poem :

Alone

The night is black
The shadows are seeking the blind
I can't see, guide me through the darkness
I'm alone, my mind is closed

Thoughts wander, and I lose track of time
Can you tell what direction I'm headed?
We're all locked in the closet of insanity
I'm alone, my heart is gone

Existence fades in and out
I can't tell whether I'm human anymore
Are we all doomed to be like this?
I'm alone, my soul is shattered

I've lost my sense of touch
I can't feel anymore
The lepers are watching me, envying for my flesh
I'm alone, can you remember me?

Pieces of me fall to the floor
If I give in will anyone care?
I've traded my time for nothing, given it all away
I'm alone, my last breath is futile, voluntary

Nice words
Me likey!!
Keep it up , bro .. would like to read more
Take care
HNS

Nice nice bro

keep the good work up

^^ Waiting to see more of your topics

N R

Thanks alot for your support, and I'm glad that you liked it, again, criticism is welcome, whether it's good or bad, tell me about your opinion so that I can improve. ^^

Farewell

Goodbye to the trees
Through which the soft winds blow
Goodbye to all the people
I never had the chance to know.
Goodbye to all the children
Who have fun in the sand
Goodbye to all the lovers
Who walk hand in hand.
Goodbye to the birds
Always chirping their song
Goodbye to the brooks
That slowly move along.
Goodbye to the moon
My only lamp in the night.
Goobye to the sun
Forever burning bright.
Goodbye to my lover
To whom I bent down on one knee
Goodbye forever,
I'll truely miss thee.