Hello everyone.
I want to share some of the poems that I write with all of you.
And I'm looking for comments and all, in order to improve. ^^
Keep in mind that, IF, this post interests you people, and I recieve enough replies, I'll keep updating it with new poems every now and then.
Enough with that, let's get this started with this poem :
Alone
The night is black
The shadows are seeking the blind
I can't see, guide me through the darkness
I'm alone, my mind is closed
Thoughts wander, and I lose track of time
Can you tell what direction I'm headed?
We're all locked in the closet of insanity
I'm alone, my heart is gone
Existence fades in and out
I can't tell whether I'm human anymore
Are we all doomed to be like this?
I'm alone, my soul is shattered
I've lost my sense of touch
I can't feel anymore
The lepers are watching me, envying for my flesh
I'm alone, can you remember me?
Pieces of me fall to the floor
If I give in will anyone care?
I've traded my time for nothing, given it all away
I'm alone, my last breath is futile, voluntary
