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Hey every one
Will as you can see this is my first topic ever
Its something i wrote last week, I hope you like it
and I’d love to hear your thoughts about it
One more thing am new to writing English
so if you see any mistakes please do correct me
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The Fog
its dark and formless
it roams the earth alone
just like me the fog is
we both roam unknown
and un-tamed by the laws of man
we just simply exist
:worried:so what do you think
,hey Levana
I just read it
it's a bit short
but it sounds really promising
I would love to read more of you writings
;)
.foXy
:D Glad you decided to share somethingاقتباس:
Will as you can see this is my first topic ever
Nice poem ... nice beginning
But what I dont understand somehow is
:flute:اقتباس:
and un-tamed by the laws of man
^.^ Thank you
a bit too short
and a bit creepy
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nice start Levana..
just show us more of them poems
ok
?
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:09:yes it is short i just couldn't think of anything more to write
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it means that we (the fog and i) are uncontrolled by laws of man
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i agree that it is short but creepy??? why
:Dand thanks for your comments
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lo0ol..
just saw this..
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creepy because of the sense of loneliness in it
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:(
oh.. will loneliness is not that creepy
hi
me too i'm new in this forum
it is a great peice
i hope you the best
you remebered me of something i've read it once.the Absurdism Approach of literature
it is full of sadness
if you like this Genre of Literature or writing you can read to Samuel Beckette
See you
hi
:D hiiiz
me too i'm new in this forum
:wink: will welcome you're guna like it her
it is a great peice i hope you the best
thanx bro
you remebered me of something i've read it once
..!?:bigeyes: really
the Absurdism Approach of literature it is full of sadness
if you like this Genre of Literature or writing
you can read to Samuel Beckette
^^ will do
See you
c ya