.:. The Fog .:.

[Levana]

Hey every one

Will as you can see this is my first topic ever

Its something i wrote last week, I hope you like it

and I’d love to hear your thoughts about it

One more thing am new to writing English

so if you see any mistakes please do correct me

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The Fog

its dark and formless

it roams the earth alone

just like me the fog is

we both roam unknown

and un-tamed by the laws of man

we just simply exist

so what do you think

[Foxy.Rabbit]

,hey Levana

I just read it
it's a bit short
but it sounds really promising


I would love to read more of you writings


.foXy

[مستر حريقة]

Will as you can see this is my first topic ever

Glad you decided to share something

Nice poem ... nice beginning

But what I dont understand somehow is

and un-tamed by the laws of man

^.^ Thank you

[dream catcher]

a bit too short
and a bit creepy
.
.
nice start Levana..
just show us more of them poems
ok
?

[Levana]

I just read it
it's a bit short
but it sounds really promising

I would love to read more of you writings

yes it is short i just couldn't think of anything more to write

But what I dont understand somehow is

and un-tamed by the laws of man

it means that we (the fog and i) are uncontrolled by laws of man

a bit too short

and a bit creepy

i agree that it is short but creepy??? why

and thanks for your comments

_

[dream catcher]

lo0ol..
just saw this..
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.
creepy because of the sense of loneliness in it
.
.

[Levana]

oh.. will loneliness is not that creepy

[hard times]

hi
me too i'm new in this forum
it is a great peice
i hope you the best
you remebered me of something i've read it once.the Absurdism Approach of literature
it is full of sadness
if you like this Genre of Literature or writing you can read to Samuel Beckette
See you

[Levana]

hi
hiiiz

me too i'm new in this forum
will welcome you're guna like it her

it is a great peice i hope you the best
thanx bro

you remebered me of something i've read it once
..!? really

the Absurdism Approach of literature it is full of sadness
if you like this Genre of Literature or writing
you can read to Samuel Beckette
^^ will do

See you
c ya