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    الموضوع: sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D

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      Talking sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D

      i got carried away with the whole compatition idea ^.^
      anyway it turned out 2 be somewhere between gothic and romance
      guess i've been listening to 2much gothic-doom metal
      anyway enjoy
      and gd luck 2 everyone else



      Sacred tears, rest my love




      In madness lies the answer to sanity


      Your blood dripping from my finger tips,


      The dagger is still clogged in your throat


      Yet you still struggle to breath


      It's all over my love…


      Suffer no more… just rest and let the angels carry you to a safe place


      Away from this hell


      I kneel closer to your body... for one last kiss...


      Slowly rapping my hand around the dagger, pulling it away


      You gasped your last breathe… with one tear drop down your cheek


      Now you're just an empty shell…


      Your eyes are frozen, their beautiful hazel color turning into a white icey blue


      your body is as cold as your heart was… yet your lips are so … red


      Bloody red, like the color of lipstick you always wanted…


      You're so pale right now yet so beautiful…


      I didn’t mean to murder you…in this dark , gloomy night… but I knew this was your only salvation


      life has already killed you inside my love


      ……..




      Remember...


      The carving we had made on the oak tree… in the deep forests


      They say that, that tree is the gateway between worlds, how ironic


      Do you remember what we wrote….?


      Yes… that’s right


      * Sedric & Emily = together forever *


      Just another cliché, but not to me…


      I shall stay with you… forever


      Holding your cold body tightly to my chest, keeping you warm


      I will always protect you like I promised….


      My love



      t.c all
      Your sun will never rise again

      The fading innocence, the dying beauty
      A word of light darkens this peaceful night.
      I'm falling - my soul is starving.
      So beautiful, this silent call -
      With eyes of mist and snow -
      This tear of our persistent cry.

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      رد: sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D

      that was beautiful
      in a gloomy kind of way

      two things:

      1 - its waaaaaaaay tooooooooooo short
      2 - the ending left me with something to be desired
      I felt like it was lacking something


      write more stuff, longer stuff
      I'll be happy to read


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      رد: sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D

      hey D.C
      always a delight cing u in my topics

      that was beautiful
      in a gloomy kind of way
      awwwwwwww sanka u
      u get a cookie

      1 - its waaaaaaaay tooooooooooo short
      lol if i wrote it too long no one would read
      anyway my head went blank < < real reason :P XD
      if i added anymore things 2 it, its just gonna be gross
      coz i was thinking that the guy would drink 4rm her blood
      3la asas 2 keep apart of her with him, didnt wanna freak anyone out so i kept it simple

      the ending left me with something to be desired
      I felt like it was lacking something
      yeah i know i cut it short
      something 2 be desired? like a twist of events or sumthing :P
      ok here goes the girl becomes a vampire and kills her lover the end xD

      write more stuff, longer stuff
      I'll be happy to read
      thats sweet of u
      and im happy u stopped by
      t.c
      Your sun will never rise again

      The fading innocence, the dying beauty
      A word of light darkens this peaceful night.
      I'm falling - my soul is starving.
      So beautiful, this silent call -
      With eyes of mist and snow -
      This tear of our persistent cry.

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      رد: sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D

      Hi Erroneous

      It's short and delighting

      good luck ..

      o
      ^.....^
      اللهم إني ظلمت نفسي ظلما كثيرا ولا يغفر الذنوب إلا أنت فاغفر لي من عندك مغفرة إنك أنت الغفور الرحيم
      ++
      سبحان الله وبحمده .. سبحان الله العظيم






      GRINDSTONE




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      رد: sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D

      hey ray ray !
      u dont say much do u >_>
      pokes ~~ stop being an emo
      lool kidding
      anyway thx 4 stoppin
      t.c
      Your sun will never rise again

      The fading innocence, the dying beauty
      A word of light darkens this peaceful night.
      I'm falling - my soul is starving.
      So beautiful, this silent call -
      With eyes of mist and snow -
      This tear of our persistent cry.

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