سأتابع التصحيح لـ(Cute angle)ـ ,,
اذا حتى الان غلطه واحده و بـنص درجه و هذه أخطاء الرايتنج ,,
A Day I'll Never Forget
I suddenly woke up after a 4-hour afternoon nap. It was so quiet, and extremely dark. I couldn't see a thing! I went out of my room hoping to see some one out there, I got out and there was my 14-year-old sister sitting in the slightly lightened living room, holding her book studying. It was the week of the final exams of my last year of high school. All the rooms' doors were closed. I was wondering what was wrong? And where everybody was? I thought it was only 7 p.m. I asked myself why are all the lights off? It seemed that everybody was sleeping. I raised my sleepy eyes, yawning, stretching, and scratching my neck looking at the wall searching for the big clock hanging on it. I got shocked when I saw that it was 3:20 a.m! At that moment I realized all what was going on; I overslept, no one woke me up to study for my biology test that will start in three hours! Everyone was asleep that's why it was dark and quiet! I ran back to my room, tears burst out of my eyes, and I just didn't know what to do! Shall I keep crying till the exam starts, I wondered confusedly. Or shall I start studying? But where will I begin from and what could I possibly study in three hours? I finally decided to make myself a cup of hot chocolate to calm me down and start studying.
I went down the stairs with my eyes still filled with tears, walked towards the kitchen, and made myself hot chocolate. As I was going back upstairs to my room, I heard the outside door open. I was afraid and I thought that in to was breaking in to our house, so I ran up to my sister and told her that I heard some one coming in. I was totally surprised to see a cruel smile drawn on her face! I heard some one come in, and I was sure of it. And suddenly my mother walked in with my two little brothers holding balloons and happy meals from McDonald's. My mouth dropped open and I said: "Mom what exactly were you doing in McDonald's at a time like this????" My mother didn't answer and had a strange expression on her face. All of us were stunned staring at each other. A loud mean hysterical laugh broke the silence, and my sister spoke saying: "I can't believe that you actually fell for it!" I said: "fell for what?" "Did you really believe that it was 3 a.m?" she answered. "It isn't 3 a.m?" I undoubtfully said. All of a sudden, I started beating her up with all the strength I had. I wasn't satisfied by beating her up with my hands only, so I started holding everything around me and hitting her with it. I poured the hot chocolate on her face and chest, and broke the mug on her head. She struggled helplessly until our mother separated us apart. It took me 30 minutes to control myself and regain my calm temper. I discovered that it was only 7:30 p.m, and that my nasty sister was the one who played with the clock's hands to trick me. I never felt as angry as I felt that day in my life, and I don't think I'll ever will
نفس الخطأ 3 مرات و ربما أكثر !!! طبعا أظن تعرفي انو Someone كلمه واحده و كذالك into و غلط ان تضعي فراغ في وسط الكلمه ,, .... ايضا هذا خطأ ماله داعي يا انجلالظاهر انتي مستعجله و انتي تكتبين
بس لازم تتحملي أخطائك و انا ما أقدر أغش لأحد
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و كما تعرفين ايضا ان Mum بحرف الـ u ـ و ليس بالـ o ـ
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و الحين يلا نحسب الدرجه ^^
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على فكره موضوعك الرايتنج رهييب والله انا قرأته و عجبنيرائع والله فيه تفاصيل و أحداث (( فلم هندي
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1- بما ان الأمتحان فيه رايتنج فمستحيل ان تحصلي درجه كامله (( - 1 درجه ))
2- الخطأ اللي في السؤال الأول ( - نص درجه )
3- أخطاء الرايتنج (((( عشان انا أدري انها مو مقصوده راح أنقص فقط نص درجه ))))
!! النتيجه !!
98%
مبروووك النجاح
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جا دورك يا (( بفك))
للأسف ناقص عليكي 6 درجات >_< hard luck
bye bye evrey one 
و ان شاء الله تنجحين طول حياتك يارب 
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