عضو مميز
اول شي احب اسلم عليكم ..
بصراحه انا اكتب خواطر بالانجليزي ولاحظت انو ماشاء الله فيه كثير اعضاء يعرفون انجليزي هنا .. علشان كذا حبيت اكتب لكم وحده من خواطري
اتمنى تعجبكم :-)
WORD LIKE LOVE MEANS PEACE AND WAR.
I FEEL HAPPY, AND SOMETIMES I WISH TO DIE.
I FLY ABOVE THE WIND, AND YET I LOOSE MY WINGS
AND CAN NOT ARISE.
I LOVE ANOTHER AND THUS I HATE MY SELF.
I AM A PRISONERE AND SO I MISS LIFE.
TO FULL IN LOVE IS TO BE SHOT BY AN ARROW.
I HAVE MY DEATH WOUND AND THUS MY GRAVE SAY HELLOE
:-) :-)
عضو موقوف
طق طق طق طق طق<<تصفيق
بصراحه رهيييب":"
عضو مميز
مشكووووور على الرد :-)
عضو متواصل الابداع
الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة king_kubaj
by the way
LOVE is something to make the girls busy
just like the football for the boys
in my special opinion
love is nothing but a big empty lie
and certainly it`s the only joke that
nobody ever enjoyed it
as for your writing
in my humble judgment
it`s very poor..and full of mistakes
...anyway...
nice try
لا تغلط
سبحان الله و بحمده... سبحان الله العظيم
عضو نشيط
1-spelling mistakes :-)and full of mistakes
2-symantic mistakes:-)
nice try
but i think you read alot of classical poetry
i can feel some quoted lines
although the ideas are not simmilar
some are even moblie messages?:
try NOT to imitate other poets
just talk spontaneously
show you own character
people like it more when you are honest
especially when you talk about love :6
( though it's my least- favoriable -subjest)
but
it's a nice try
give it another shot sis;-)
your gonna make it
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة TIFA Lockheart ; 24-04-2003 الساعة 09:18 AM
..Every night and every morn
some for misery are born
every morn and every night
some are born to sweet delight
some are born to endless night
Blake........
عضو نشيط
خبري فيهاالرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ( الآزوري 10 )
طق طق طق طق طق<<تصفيق
طخ طخ طخ طخ:-)
..Every night and every morn
some for misery are born
every morn and every night
some are born to sweet delight
some are born to endless night
Blake........
عضو نشيط
خخخخخخخخخخخخخالرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة BOOOB_2002
============
لا يلي ما عندها أخطاء
ما في احد ماعنده اخطاء
بس اهم شىء ينتبه لها
ومايعيدها:6
..Every night and every morn
some for misery are born
every morn and every night
some are born to sweet delight
some are born to endless night
Blake........
عضو متواصل الابداع
اقول...يمدحون الترفيهي ترا..
In life there are going to be some things that’s going to make it hard to smile.
But what ever you do, through all the rain and the pain, you got to keep your sense of humor, you got to smile for me now
REMEMBER THAT
عضو مثالي
الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة king_kubaj
by the way
LOVE is something to make the girls busy
just like the football for the boys
in my special opinion
love is nothing but a big empty lie
and certainly it`s the only joke that
nobody ever enjoyed it
as for your writing
in my humble judgment
it`s very poor..and full of mistakes
...anyway...
nice try
خوباج أوافق بنقطه والي هي أنه كذبه خلت المجتمع الغربي يصدقا
بس لويفهمون أن الحب هو الأخلاص في الشي تتغر الأحوال
عضو مثالي
أنا معاك بنقطه أن احب مجرد وهم وهو الي دمر المجتمع الغربيالرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة king_kubaj
by the way
LOVE is something to make the girls busy
just like the football for the boys
in my special opinion
love is nothing but a big empty lie
and certainly it`s the only joke that
nobody ever enjoyed it
as for your writing
in my humble judgment
it`s very poor..and full of mistakes
...anyway...
nice try
بس لو يفهم الواحد أن ةالحب هو الأخلاص في الشئ تتغير الأحوال
مصمم الفريق الفائز في مسابقة ثلاثية الإبداع
كلام سليم
عضو
WoOoOoOoW :واو:
Thanx senioreta ;-) ;-) ;-)
ابغى اشوف خواطر بالعربي طيب ":" ;-)
Cry out!
Cry out loud
I've got toCry out from my wilderness
Cry out for a heart gone bad
I've got to Cry out like I never have
Cry out! I've been had, I've been had
and there ain't no way around a heart so mad
عضو مبدع
الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة king_kubaj
by the way
LOVE is something to make the girls busy
just like the football for the boys
in my special opinion
love is nothing but a big empty lie
and certainly it`s the only joke that
nobody ever enjoyed it
as for your writing
in my humble judgment
it`s very poor..and full of mistakes
...anyway...
nice try
صراحه حلو كلامك
ما شاء الله
طبعا سنيورتا
ميرسسسسسسسسسسي
ويسلمو
عضو مميز
مشكووووووور على ردك :-)الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة king_kubaj
by the way
LOVE is something to make the girls busy
just like the football for the boys
in my special opinion
love is nothing but a big empty lie
and certainly it`s the only joke that
nobody ever enjoyed it
as for your writing
in my humble judgment
it`s very poor..and full of mistakes
...anyway...
nice try
بس الحب اسمى معنى في الحياة بدون الحب مايستطيع الانسان يعيش ..
فاول شروط الاسلام محبة الله ورسوله
ومن صفاة المؤمن محبة الانسان لاخوه المسلم
و الحب العاطفي بين الزوج وزوجته ...
وكمان مو عيب انو الواحد يحب دام انو حبه ماتجاوز الحدود :-)
عضو مميز
:-) :-)الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة TIFA Lockheart
1-spelling mistakes :-)
2-symantic mistakes:-)
nice try
but i think you read alot of classical poetry
i can feel some quoted lines
although the ideas are not simmilar
some are even moblie messages?:
try NOT to imitate other poets
just talk spontaneously
show you own character
people like it more when you are honest
especially when you talk about love :6
( though it's my least- favoriable -subjest)
but
it's a nice try
give it another shot sis;-)
your gonna make it
i'm not imitating :-)
any way thanks:-)
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