IS THAT WHAT I GET

[bAd_D]

Hey you, so called a friend:
I’ve known you all my life, first chance you get, you stab me with the knife

And when am around you say you’re my friend, but you take your chances when I don’t attend, my problem has always and will always be, I always get friends too close to me, I give all I can and trust blindly, hoping that friend will be there in my need, but you have proved in so many times, that your only a friend in high times, and the first chance you get to hit, you take it and don’t give a sh**, how could you do this to the only love I ever had, you brake us up and then say that’s so sad, hope you sleep tight knowing that you, you broke my heart though I was so true, for 9 years we stayed, is that what I get from you two.

Hey you, so called a lover:

How could I not see through your heart, how could my best friend tear us apart, how could you believe him and not believe me, how did I let you deceive me, why did I trust you and didn’t even see, I must have thought finding love was easy, 1 stab is ok but 2 are too much, one from my friend and one from your touch, was it all a game, way from the start?, were you tow planning to tear up my heart?, I thought you were true, thought I found the cure, this is how I was paid, is that what I get from you too.

[The Dark Heart]

WOW..

That's soo cool

i liked it because it rhymes .. Cool Words too

Thanks

[bAd_D]

thanks alot firewolf, its most appreciated from me

take care and thanx again for passing by

[The Dark Heart]

Hey

Ur welcome

Keep up the good work bro

and also try to make it rhyme alot .. it would look better

see ya

[TRY NO RACE]

honestly,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,amazing

what can i say more,,,its perfect,,,but i think you shouldnt write it like you wanna tell us how blinded you were,,because you were not,,,,,9 years!!
i know that am not suppose to talk about your personal matters but i think you just have to forget them,,,,,,they have betrayed you ,,such things happens
people like those,,,,,do not worth your time ever
just take care and please whenever you write words like these bring them here.
you are great
c ya

[bAd_D]

thanxxx ppl

u have left me speachless
i think a poem becomes great when it talks about a real experience
and thanx again try_no_race
btw: ive put a new poem check it out, this time, its a happy one
peace

[miss_Evil]

Hiiii'z bAd_D!

I Didn't just like the words.... I loved it

It's so0o0o cool

U should keep it up!

The words....Ummmm...U've chosen it Very Carefully right?

Sounds cool i liked them very much...it's sooo Deep!

As I told u b4 U should keep it up !

cause it's like a gift from god u Know

Masha'Allah

Peace

[hunter-zero]

why do people always post poems and lyrics ?
some people might think iam rude but in fact iam straight forward ghuy i say it in your face
that sucked really if you want my reateing ! that sucked !
all the guy`s go wow cool alright rythem and every thing but rythem isn`t every thing its just over used the back stabing thing , next time befour posting evaluate your poem from a nuetral prospective
peace out

[bAd_D]

actually zero i think its ur opinion, not everyone has the same aspects man, and by saying that ur insulting the ppl who actually like it, i wont be rude and cuss at u or smthing, i just wanna say, if u hate something posted on this forum, keep it for ur self, OR u can just show the reasons why u hate it, i couldnt help but to notice that u have something personal against me, anyways its ur opinion and i appreciate the other ppl opinions and i WILL keep writingpeace

[hunter-zero]

no bellive me i have nothing personal against you but you asked for evaaluationa nd you got it i didnt want to flatter you as you said not evey one has his the same aspects iam stateing mine maybe you`ll do better next time and stay off the chessey topics