story and poetry from my mind

[SAD TEAR]

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته
حبيت اني اطرح بين ايديكم بعض القصص والقصائد التي من تأليفي واتمنى ان تنال اعجاااابكم
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القصيده
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I have lucky *** If I will be with you
Every body *** asking me about you

How is your girl friend .... girl friend?

She a nice girl on this world

She a gift from my God

She is always in my mind

Really I love her

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القصه

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At early morning, I went to my work

I saw somebody come to me

He gives me letter. I don't know from whom?

I open it. I saw the surprise

They grab my girlfriend

I run to my car

My brine in my eyes

I want to revenge them

Somebody call me

I heard my girlfriend voice

She said Help me

I was walk like crazy

I praying to ALLAH to help me

I went to them a place

I fighting them

In my mind, I want to keep her from them

No problems if they will kill me but let her go

Then somebody shoot me in my hand

But MY GOD was with me

I throw by the stone

Then he is fall down

I run to my girlfriend

I hold her. I hug her on my chest

We was crying together

Then we went to my car

We saw new life

Then she said

I love you…

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اتمنى ان تعجبكم
وان تعيشوا القصه
انتظروا البقيه في الايام الجايه
وشـــــكرا
sad tear

[NaughtY AngeL]

It's cute, but make it longer next time
I saw a movie like that by the way

[Another_One]

wooooooooow
u can be a hero
but indian
really u made a nice one

i like it ...but concentrate on ur grammar mistakes


thank u brother/sister

[SAD TEAR]

It's cute, but make it longer next time

I saw a movie like that by the way

thank you so much على مرورك أختي
ما شاء الله أنفع مؤلف أفلام خخخخخخخخ

sad tear

[SAD TEAR]

wooooooooow


u can be a hero
but indian
really u made a nice one

i like it ...but concentrate on ur grammar mistakes

thank u brother/sister

أشكرك خوي أبو محمد على المرور
وأشكرك على النقد

أخوك / sad tear