hi there people i'd like to post what my freinds called poems (i don't think so ) but i'd like to post them and i'll start a new post talking about somthing in my mind after a day or two ,,but please give me your opinions :
mother
mother ,,,why i can't talk to you anymore
where were you when i felt sick
when i was being attacked in this war
why i can't see your face
why i can't feel your hand
i want to leave soon and yet your not here
why didn't you tell dad not to beat me
why didn't you stop me bleeding
why didn't you take me to the park
why didn't you tell me a bed time story
why didn't you let me eat candy
why didn't you buy me a doll
why didn't you listen to my pain
why didn't you check on my school
why didn't you let me jump
why didn't you let me run
why didn't you let me fly....
do i have to graw up this noon
do i have to turn on that child
i realy want to take my leave but you are not here
dad beats me becouse of you
my family hates me becouse of you
god will punish me becouse of you
my heart abandoned me becouse of you
my feelings where shatterd becouse of you
but i shall be better than you
i want to leave but i shall wait for you
this world
to this world i was broaght
i was born between the claws of this monster
yet i shall see no use of me
i see nothing fits in this place
i see nothing for me to taste
i see tears and sorrow
i see pain and hate
i shall go and i shall never return
to this world i hate the most
i was beaten and humilated
by the young ,small ,weak claimers
i can see the desire to kill in their eyes
but yet i don't get it ,i won't anderstand ,i can't figure it out
i was banned of my childhood
i was treated like a man ,,an yet i was a little girl
i was forced to steel ,to curse ,to belive in being sick
but yet i shall go and never see their faces again
i shal take my leave and leave this world i hate
this world stole my tears
my feelings are broken and shatterd
i can't feel any more
i can't see anymore
i can't taste anymore
i want to cry badly
i want to feel happy
i want to taste sweets
but ,,but i can't do this anymore
i can't stay in this world
yet a lot missing ,and mind me for the spelling and grammer ,,,
keep writing