…::&*^ Midnight Feelings ^*&::…
السلام عليكم^^"
هذه اول خاطرة لي ^.^ <<< يوجد قبلها واحدة لكن تعبانة لا تصلح للنشر
هي تشبه الشعر اكثر منها خاطرة، لكني استأذنت من الأخ صقر المنتدى بوضعها هنا وسمح لي مشكورا
طبعا لا يوجد التزام تام بالقواعد خخخ sorry XD لول الوزن اهم ^.^
**وقت الكتابة: 3- 4 فجرا ^،^ يوم الخميس الماضي 25 مايو
**لغة الكتابة: English
**عدد الأجزاء: 2 يعني جزءان + قاموس ملحق
**عدد السطور: 16 سطرا في كل جزء << 16× 2=32 سطرا
**نوع المشاعر: حزن وضياع O.o
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feeling no feel is what I all the day & night feel
inside me it tells it's not enough to give my tear
for some one who I lost, some one who is dear
It's just like the sight and the touch is not real
and a sound tells me and shout in my ear
It's nothing you can do now and here
and forever you will live, no body from u is near
hurts is your future, days are full of fear
open your eyes cause everything is now clear
and start for feeding time, pain is your meal
Is that any thing could you do for getting heal?
yes, find something make you disappear
or a hand can strongly your soul steal
It's the end now, my rose is going to sear1
watch the sky, smile and don’t even veer2
then sleep carefully, It's your last cheer3
…::&*&*&*&*&*&*::…
where is me? It seems something like a night
no body is here, no moon or son's bright
just that flying thread of light
and lucid4 wind which is cold and kind
It's touching me, but suddenly in the darkness hide
why did you leave me with the dark side?
and let me alone in this world fight
I cant see what I want now to find
not colored my life, just black and white
with my hot tears my destiny I'll write
wish an angle to come and beyond him hide
I'll see my way then, If I still have a sight
but we cant get what we want, that’s right
well, be thankful, if someone keeps u in his mind
It,s better to drop my heart from this height
or put it under the sword of a knight
...::&*&*&::…
انتهى^.^
ارجو ان تكون قد اعجبتكم &.&
القاموس لا ننساه
sear: يذبل
veer2: ينحني
cheer3: بهجة، سعادة
lucid4: مشرق
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