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الموضوع: >< BeD TiMe StoRy ><

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    Smile >< BeD TiMe StoRy ><

    Warm welcomes

    listen to the bedtime story am going to say
    a beautiful fairytale in my simple way
    ill tug you into bed and play with your hair
    close ur little eyes , and ill kiss u right there


    imagine the glitter in the quiet sky
    with beautiful sparks twinkling so high
    musical tingles of the chime
    listen sweet one , once upon a time ...



    a story of a girl , her life , and her smile
    her feelings , and even her tears for a while
    it starts with a simple sunny day
    quiet and calm , just the usual way
    reading her book , leaning on a tree
    it was her simple way to be free
    quiet , calm , her perfect place
    her secret world with dreams to face



    that day she reached chapter eight
    where it was the meeting of john and kate
    suddenly she looked up and there she saw
    at the edge of the river , where daffodils grow



    standing there , someone she never saw before
    with men behind him three , maybe four
    she couldn't keep her eyes off him even for a while
    when he leaned to drink , her lips curved to a smile ..



    he seemed so simple and looked so kind
    who was he ? thoughts ran through her mind
    he looked at her and smiled .. so gentle
    her heart skipped a beat .. he was an angel



    one last time he smiled again
    there it was her heart .. in heaven
    tears started to run on the edge of her eyes
    when he left .. why did she start to cry ?!


    what was the feeling she felt inside
    a strange feeling , she couldn't hide ..
    she couldn't get him out of her thought
    she liked the feeling his look has brought
    something new but beautiful inside
    forever and always in her mind


    months passed , and so days and weeks
    she was always there beside the creek
    with hope to meet him maybe by chance
    she really felt she was in a trance


    he was everywhere she went
    in the flowers she smelt his scent
    she saw his smile on every face
    his look she felt was full of grace


    he was an angel sent from above
    to guide her through with care and love
    he was in her dreams day and night
    through sadness he held her tight


    she was walking through the town on one sunny day
    she passed the church that was on her way
    music played and people lined up the isle
    while the bride and groom walked through with a smile


    her smile faded away because there she saw
    her angle so gentle saying his vow
    he seemed so happy and full of pride
    while walking to the carridge with his bride


    there she was staring right through
    looking at him .. this cant be true
    one lucky girl his wife to be
    because of the angel she is going to see


    he looked at her one last time
    by this look he was commiting a crime
    he smiled at her but that hurt more
    for there he killed her .. the one she was living for


    she went back to the quiet creek
    tears non-stop on her cheek
    goodbye my guardian angle am left alone
    something in me is missing when u are gone


    her heart ached with hurt , her book on her knee
    she smiled calmly and leaned on the tree
    she reached the last chapter and closed her eye
    when the two lovers departed , and kate sadly dies



    !Hey you get up

    N R

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    22-07-2006
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    *APPLAUSE APPLAUSE APPLAUSE*
    that actually made me laugh !
    Who wrote that ?? The lyrics are magical and the rhyming is really great!!
    Thanks for sharing the poem .. and I'm Up I'm Up!

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    رد: >< BeD TiMe StoRy ><

    It was't me who worte it
    though i do write better poems
    I'll post some later

    "" anyway thank you very much sister for "" Applausing

    Nice having you in my topic

    N R

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    you are welcome and I can't wait to read poems written by Nakash the great !
    Don't take long to post them here , will ya ?

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    رد: >< BeD TiMe StoRy ><

    very nice
    really great

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hide n seek
    you are welcome and I can't wait to read poems written by Nakash the great !


    Don't take long to post them here , will ya ?


    I will

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Toboe
    very nice

    really great


    .....Thanx for sharing

    N R

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    Woooooooooww cool
    i luv that story and i am feelig sleepy from the story magic
    thanks bro and keep goin

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Blue_Gaya
    Woooooooooww cool

    i luv that story and i am feelig sleepy from the story magic

    thanks bro and keep goin


    So many thanks for you

    I appreciate your existance

    N R

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