Dear Darkness

[Toboe]

This is my first topic in this forum and I hope you'll like it

It's something I've written during very bad times

any comments are appreciated

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Dear Darkness.

What did you do

Why it is always you

The one that keeps visiting me...

after every moment of happiness

or peaceful day..

Dear Darkness...

You're always on my mind

when you don't show up early..

Cuz it's always you..

the first guest to arrive to my party..

I keep wondering why you're late...

and what kind of surprises you're planning..

Dear Darkness...

Your gloomy presence keeps me hiding

away from the world…

So you won't hurt the others

and save them from you..

Dear Darkness...

your friendship is just a prison

of pain and struggle..

The closer we get

The more you become my enemy...

Dear Darkness...

You're not dear anymore...

You kept me thinking of ways

to fight you...

As a gift for our long relationship

why don't you release me

What did I do to deserve you

When I flash the light of happiness at you...

You'll taste the pain you caused me...

I'll keep fighting you

'till you disappear from my life...

Farewell my dear friend...

I won't miss you...

Let me enjoy my life

away from you...

Toboe

[psx-ps3-ps3-ps4]

Hi
What can I say? your topic is marvellous and it is filled with emotions
I cant Believe it is your first topic
keep going , and maby someday i'll catch up with you



oh!!!! I forgot to say thank you for this nice piece





Byeeeee

[the duke]

hello nd welc to our forum

everything that is fro the inside is lovely, doesnt really have to affect others as long as it means something for u

i hope u will ger rid of this darkness that is keeping u from living ur life
I LIKED THE CLOSURE

best regards
THE DUke

[HIROSHI_11]

Thanks sis for great topic

It kind of reminds me about myself

Hope you get rid of it

Regards,

Hiroshi

[Lips Licker]

It's something I've written during very bad times

Such of life

Dear Darkness...
You're always on my mind
when you don't show up early..
Cuz it's always you..
the first guest to arrive to my party..
I keep wondering why you're late...
and what kind of surprises you're planning..

U gonna make me cry
I have the same thoughts

I really liked ur complain
It's emotionally

Toboe

و النعم والله

Thnx sis and keep it up
,,,
,,,


Lips Licker

[Toboe]

Thanks people
I really appreciate your comments
they are encouraging to write more

luckily that darkness is no more right now

[Toboe]

hello nd welc to our forum

everything that is fro the inside is lovely, doesnt really have to affect others as long as it means something for u

yeah i agree with you on that
and thanks for welcoming me

It kind of reminds me about myself

I'm glad you found something related to you in this one
thanks for your reply

U gonna make me cry
I have the same thoughts

I really hope you don't have them again

I really liked ur complain
It's emotionally

Thanks a lot

[TRY NO RACE]

I felt like I`m the one who wrote this full of sadness piece
you nicely expressed your feeling
I really admire what you wrote .
keep your writing up and more important is your insistence and fighting , Up Up Up
thanX for sharing

[Toboe]

I felt like I`m the one who wrote this full of sadness piece
you nicely expressed your feeling
I really admire what you wrote .
keep your writing up and more important is your insistence and fighting , Up Up Up
thanX for sharing

Thanks a lot for your encouragement
glad you liked it

[NaughtY AngeL]

Ya Allaaaah


Very sad esh hatha


But nice


Great work, keep it up


Ciao for now

[مستر حريقة]

Thanks sister for ur sweet emotional words

it really sounds too sad

but thats how life is

u can keep writting, and even publishing ur hurts but u can't get rid of all of it


keep it up

Special Thanks to u

[Amanda~]

thanks sis very nice topic

but whay all this sadness sis
dont worry be happy
keep it up

[Toboe]

Ya Allaaaah


Very sad esh hatha

was it that sad!! just kidding
well, when you're feeling sad, you better let it out than keep it inside, right?

But nice


Great work, keep it up


Thanks, hopefully i will

Thanks sister for ur sweet emotional words

You're Welcome

it really sounds too sad

but thats how life is

u can keep writting, and even publishing ur hurts but u can't get rid of all of it

very true. And as i said, better let it out than keep it inside

keep it up

Special Thanks to u

Thanks to you as well

[Toboe]

thanks sis very nice topic

but whay all this sadness sis

dont worry be happy

keep it up

Thanks for passing by my topic

and likin' it

well, as i said at the beginning of the topic

it's been a very sad and painful time when i wrote it

that's why it was sad but i ended it with a bit of hope if you can see it there

and so far things are much better and let's hope it will stay like that

Thanks again for everyone

[DarkLordDragon]

Hi Toboe

That's really something, very nice writing I like what you wrote and the words you chose to write this poem, I like how you described your struggle with the darkness and the way you are sending the message to the darkness... Your writings and the subject remind me of my own old style nice writing and keep the good works up.... Take care