Am Far Away ( poem or song ) by: me

[Mr.FMZ]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

This peace or writing could be called a poem. I wish readers will like it.
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I'm looking there, where you are?
I'm living there, in you dear

Am far away am far away
I used to be yours someday

You left me? Yeah
I left you? Yeah
or situations like these did it to us, it also yeah

but nothing changed in my feeling
and nothing will heal me. what a healing!

Am far away am far away
i used to be yours someday

"You are the best"...The song is saying
Words pass in mind... "Am I playing?"
Is there any need to get over it?
Will she become the one, I already left?

"I don't want I don't want"
"My heart is stock whatever yours aren't"

Whatever I am doing... I still far away
no matter keeping say .. "i was yours someday"

and today:
i promise you
For both of us, I'll chose the best
I'll enjoy a lot, having fun, a lot
I'll travel a lot, and
"I'll Love a lot"

and when I'm used to that:
Please don't show up and keep your hat
Be far away be far away
Forget you were mine someday
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By Bader
Mr.FMZ

[~*RoSaMaRia*~]

This peace or writing could be called a poem. I wish readers will like it.

piece

I'm looking there, where you are?

where are u ?
if u mean 2 ask
but if u mean 2 wonder & pretend 2 be surprised>>>urs will be correct
but u have 2 replace
! with ?

Will she become the one, I already left?

have left
we had a rule in grammar that the verb's tense after already should be present perfect >> i don't know

"My heart is stock whatever yours aren't"

isn't
would u mind expressing what do u mean by stock in arabic ??
cause unfotunately i didn't get it

no matter keeping say ."

it's a bit complexed , don't u think so ?

For both of us, I'll chose the best

choose
*********
in the title it's better 2 say by myself than saying by me
*********
finally , it was really beautiful but sooooo tough
i think there is a big diference
between ur arabic method of writing & english one

best regards

[مستر حريقة]

Well done

very good Mr

i quote part of it as a nickname
thank you

N R

[:: HiDEY ::]

* Applause*


Very ,Very beautiful

Sounds like it was written by an inspiration


I especially loved the ending
May you be blessed

,Be safe

[Mr.FMZ]

This peace or writing could be called a poem. I wish readers will like it.

piece

I'm looking there, where you are?

where are u ?
if u mean 2 ask
but if u mean 2 wonder & pretend 2 be surprised>>>urs will be correct
but u have 2 replace
! with ?

Will she become the one, I already left?

have left
we had a rule in grammar that the verb's tense after already should be present perfect >> i don't know

"My heart is stock whatever yours aren't"

isn't
would u mind expressing what do u mean by stock in arabic ??
cause unfotunately i didn't get it

no matter keeping say ."

it's a bit complexed , don't u think so ?

For both of us, I'll chose the best

choose
*********
in the title it's better 2 say by myself than saying by me
*********
finally , it was really beautiful but sooooo tough
i think there is a big diference
between ur arabic method of writing & english one

best regards

in the beginning, i want to thank you for writing this comment so i can improve my english writing.

- where you are ( you are right, it should be without ? )
- i already left ( have left ). i am not sure about that but i could use the short form of "I have" in the poem. ( I'v already left).
- my heart is stock.
you are right i am wrong here. however, in the first version of the poem, i wrote it "i am stock in you whatever you aren't".
this should solve the problem.
i am stock in you = انا عالق بكي

- No matter keeping say .. i thing it's not so complecated.
- By Me .. it is - as we say in arabic - a famous saying. so i think it is not wrong.

thank again for that
wish you the best
Bader

[:: HiDEY ::]

No Arabic please
And thank you
(:

[Mr.FMZ]

Well done

very good Mr

i quote part of it as a nickname
thank you

N R

I'm really sorry for all this time to reply
I just keep forgetting it
thank you very much N R and I wish if you don't mind telling me the part you quote.
thank you again
Bader

[Mr.FMZ]

* Applause*

Very ,Very beautiful

Sounds like it was written by an inspiration

I especially loved the ending
May you be blessed

,Be safe

same sorry for you Hidy
and thank you very much for your nice words
I wish it is like it sounds
be good
Bader

[wa7da_7afla]

It`s great >> i love it

[Mr.FMZ]

It`s great >> i love it

thank you very much
i'm happy that you loved it

[عاشقة العنابي]

very very nice and beautiful
iam waiting another things is great same this

[Mr.FMZ]

very very nice and beautiful
iam waiting another things is great same this

I'm happy that you saw it beautiful ..
thank you very much