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    الموضوع: My First Post and a Poem

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      My First Post and a Poem

      al salam 3lekom

      how are you guys/girls

      well this is a poem I came up with, it's nothing much. it's just a bunch of words rhyimg together. maybe I should just get into rap instead





      Light

      I’ve lived in darkness, all my life
      As if my only way, was to strife
      Despair, Despair, has become my ground
      Sadness, Sadness, has become my shroud
      But when I Saw her, I saw light

      Through the crowd, I’ve cut my way
      The faces I saw, looked so gray
      All I did, was try to sway
      From absurdity to Sanity
      But when I saw her, I saw light

      Void and null, seemed my life
      To live, to live, seemed so pointless
      These dark thoughts, were my rife
      I tried to fight them but, it was meanigless
      But when I saw her, I saw light

      White and black, became so mixed
      On sorrow and grief , my mind was fixed
      No matter how, I tried to stop
      These dark thoughts, were on top
      But when I saw her, I Saw light

      Then on a Tuesday morning, I saw her
      And then, all that I knew have changed
      Into the dark corners of my soul, she turned the light
      My little dark world, has changed, has changed!
      And so when I saw her, I Saw light

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      رد: My First Post and a Poem

      Welcome at the English Forum and thanks for the nice poem

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      رد: My First Post and a Poem

      و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

      This poem is really nice
      It has a special rhythm
      &
      The choice of the words is nice
      These words can be considered as a song's lyrics
      (A rap song as you said)
      I really like it !!

      Many thanks brother Gemonasai for sharing
      and welcome to the English forum
      We hope to see more of your Topics
      Keep up
      &
      good luck
      ^^
      سبحان الله وبحمده .. سبحان الله العظيم

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      26-01-2005
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      ؛؛ .. فلســ(غزة)ــطين .. ؛؛
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      رد: My First Post and a Poem

      I used to write poems
      but not anymore

      And that thread was just awesome brother

      Keep your work up
      Thank you

      And welcome to the English Forum

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