Find The Error

[Bushido]

حسناً، سأقوم بكتابة جملة باللغة الانجليزية وتحتوي على خطأ نحوي (GRAMMAR)
أو إملائي (SPELLING) والمطلوب من العضو التالي تصحيح الجملة من خلال كتابتها مرّة أخرى بشكل صحيح وبعد ذلك يقوم هو بكتابة جملة خاطئة والعضو التالي يصحح وهكذا.

مثال : Omar go to school everyday
التصحيح: Omar goes to school everyday



حسناً، جملتي هي:
.We shod continu and never stob


شكراً لكم.

[Evil Saiyan]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

We should continue and never stop

my sentence :

you must trus at yoursilf

Thanks bro ^^

[metal Z]

Hi

nice topic

you must trus at yoursilf
you must trust in yourself

I instol Windos Live Massenger last week

[مستر حريقة]

Thanks for the game brother

I instol Windos Live Massenger last week

I install Windows Live Messenger last week

We was away for 4 month

[alamawi]

I instol Windos Live Massenger last week

I installed Windows live Messenger last week

new sentence

(Frined in need is frined indeed )

[مستر حريقة]

Dude you corrected the wrong sentence
... Anyway

Friend in need is a friend indeed

I went to school to get as many information as I could

[alamawi]

Sorry dude....but i don't think that the correction to the metal Z's sentence would be:
( I install Windows Live Messenger last week )

That is why i have corrected it ...sorry if that against the rules
thanks anyway.....


I went to school to get as many information as I could

I went to the school to get as many information as I could


the new sentence is

" The self distructive system has been activate "

[مستر حريقة]

Sorry dude....but i don't think that the correction to the metal Z's sentence would be:

( I install Windows Live Messenger last week )

That is why i have corrected it ...sorry if that against the rules
thanks anyway.....

Oooops
I am sorry brother I got wasted, I forgot about last week

Accept my apology

I went to school to get as many information as I could

I went to the school to get as many information as I could

" And here the right correction is " as MUCH

" The self distructive system has been activate "

The self-destruction system has been activated

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When its all setted and done.. it get harder but it won't take away my heart

[alamawi]

" And here the right correction is " as MUCH

oh yeah " MUCH" is the right correction.

When its all setted and done.. it get harder but it won't take away my heart

That's a hard one...i don't really understand the meaning but i will give it a try

When it was all setted and done. It would get harder but it wouldn't take away my heart

the new sentence is

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We are not alone at this word

[مستر حريقة]

When it was all setted and done. It would get harder but it wouldn't take away my heart

was = is
( setted = set ( no ed for past tense
would = there is no would
get = gets
wouldn't = won't

That if you don't want to change the meaning of the song


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We are not alone at this word

We are not alone in this world

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I think that when Stephanie provides comedy on her show, demonstrates how talented Stephanie can be for the audience and me as a viewer

[alamawi]

was = is
( setted = set ( no ed for past tense
would = there is no would
get = gets
wouldn't = won't

That if you don't want to change the meaning of the song

[/center]

" When it was all setted and done. It would get harder but it wouldn't take away my heart "

what i'm thinking of is:
Setted is a verb that has the same meaning of "group" (as a verb) so i didn't consider it as a mistake.

The first mistake i have founded:
(its) because its used for possessive so i had to change it to (it's) and that will open 3 choices ( it was, it is or it has). And for each
choice the verbs have to be changed (would,won't,get).

but i have corrected the sentence with the first choice since i just can guess the time .

We are not alone in this world

[/center]

That's the right correction

your new Sentence was

I think that when Stephanie provides comedy on her show, demonstrates how talented Stephanie can be for the audience and me as a viewer

[/center]

the correction will be
I think that when Stephanie provides comedy on her show, it demonstrates how talented Stephanie can be for the audience and me as a viewer

Also using "she" can give the same meaning
I think that when Stephanie provides comedy on her show, she demonstrates how talented she can be for the audience and me as a viewer

the new sentence is
The world was facing an energy crisis. It was obvious that the supply of petroluem will run out faster than expect.

[مستر حريقة]

the new sentence is

The world was facing an energy crisis. It was obvious that the supply of petroluem will run out faster than expect

Will = Would
Expect = Expected


In these words, we are not interesting in who makes the paper, or whom builts the bridge

[alamawi]

The world was facing an energy crisis. It was obvious that the supply of petroluem will run out faster than expect
Will = Would
Expect = Expected

Also petroluem = petroleum

In these words, we are not interesting in who makes the paper, or whom builts the bridge

In these words, we are not interested in who makes the paper, or whom builds the bridge

A new sentence
Confront your enemies, avoid him when you can..a gentleman will walk but never runs