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    الموضوع: A short, short story

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      الصورة الرمزية Doel
      Doel غير متصل آنَ للفارِسِ أن يَتَرَجّل
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      A short, short story

      Hello everyone, It's been a while since I posted anything here, and probably most of you don't even know me. But it's alrightt, I hope we'll get to know each other much myuch better in the future.

      my little story goes like this:

      He sat in the dark corner of the small coffee shop on the corner of the lively street. All he did during that day was watching the stream of peolpe going in and out of the small door that signalled the coming or leaving of a customer with the jolly sound of a set of small bells.His life seemed worthless to him at that moment; he lost, he lost the battle, lost his future, and thus, lost the last thing that kept him alive till that moment.

      Only a month ago, he was a totally diferent person; he always smiled at people, he was always the friendly person who would help any person, even if he didn't know them.but now, what I see in front of me is a ghost of that person I used to know, he had become in a state even his emenies wouldn't wish im to be in. 3 weeks ago, he recieved a call from one of his closest friends, he picked it up happily as he usually does and teh always cheerful "Hello" came out of his mouth, but later, it seemed to me that he suddenly lost his flame, lost the spark that made him distinguished from all the semi-robots in our college,his faec then e[ressed so many different emotions; tears started gathering in his eyes, and then a look of disbelief masked his face. He said: "you're lying right? please tell me you are" . he hung up the phone and continued that day as if nothing happened, thenhe disappeared for a whole week, the person who never missed a class just flew out of everybodies minds as if he never existed. No one mentioned him or asked as to why he had suddenly disappeared.I went to his house to chek on him, but he wan't there. Immediatly I knew that he was in that place; when ever he needed to think or just sit all by himself, he went to sit under the big oak at the foot on the hill on the edge of town. and there I knew what was wrong; he has lost his brother in a car accedent, and his family didn't have the heart to tell him, so his friend had to tell him after two full months of the accedent.


      okay, i'm feeling a bit sleepy now, so I'll continue this later

      I just hope you all like it and not just kick me out

      Doel

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      مشاركة: A short, short story

      هذا الرجل مسكين ....

      يعجبني كثيراً الوصفة الدقيقة و الحيّة
      وأرعب في القرأة باستمرار..

      شكراً لك


      الحياة مملوءة بالصدفات...
      قد يتقاطع خطان متوازيان يوما ما......

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      Please continue

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