Hello everyone, How are you all?
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In fact I like to write poems in english and I have some attempts, I would be very grateful if you give me your observation about them.. In this post I'll put my first poem which I wrote it in my first year at college, I hope you like it..
Now I'll leave you with my first attempt..
My dream !!
I see ourselves, walking hand in hand
Leaving our foot prints
In the soft, sunset sand
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I see myself, looking at you
Knowing I love you so
Hoping you love me as much too
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I see you so gentle and fair
The full moon light
Shining of your golden hair
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I see you in the noon,
My beautiful dream girl,
Lighter than the sun and moon
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I see you in the night
As a shining star in a dark sky
Waiting me as your knight
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I see ourselves, sharing our hearts
Knowing we are together
Even though distance keeps us apart
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I see ourselves, living our dreams
Trusting in each other
Feeling what true love means
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I see our worlds becoming one
Feeling amazed and blessed
For what God has provided and done
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Then sadly I awake with the morning light
But know I'll be with you again
When I go to sleep tonight..
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