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    الموضوع: Please, Dad

    1. #1
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      26-01-2005
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      ؛؛ .. فلســ(غزة)ــطين .. ؛؛
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      Smile Please, Dad


      HI



      As soft winds sweep away the days
      I look back on life through a haze
      Remember playgrounds, parks and friends
      In childlike gaze that never ends
      The laughter in a game of catch
      Shall memory ever attach
      To innocence in youthful eyes

      Catching the ball to Dad's surprise

      I recall my first bike, first wreck
      Who picked me up, said, What the heck
      Convinced me to give one more try
      While, knees skinned, I forgot to cry
      Just the joy knowing he was there
      Making him proud my only care
      There was nothing I couldn't do
      My heart held fast that to be true


      Though teenage years were kind of rough
      I sure wasn't too big or tough
      You taught me to defend what's right
      And never back down from a fight
      So I learned the hard way to stand
      Still, with each lump, I found your hand
      Drawing from you an inner strength
      And stubborn pride of equal length

      But there the line of fate was drawn
      As though I blinked and you were gone
      I found myself facing the sun
      Not man, not boy, fatherless, one
      Eyes blinded by a void inside
      I could not live that you had died
      Alas finding it to be true
      I could do nothing without you

      Please, Dad, today just hear my call
      I'm sorry that I dropped the ball
      My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned
      My emotions undisciplined
      I can't get up although I try
      Please don't be upset if I cry
      Though I can't fight what I can't see


      hope u enjoy it guys and girls


      Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me


    2. #2
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      15-04-2005
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      مشاركة: Please, Dad

      woooooooooooooooooooooooow
      INCREDIBLE poem
      that's the best for u.... i can't describe how much i liked it
      it's rhymed and a great topic and excellent expression
      CONGRATULATION
      BEST REGARDS
      THE DUKE
      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



      Life isn't about how many breath you take, it's about how many times it takes your
      breath away



      Life is about being sad in most of the times so that we can value the moments when being glad

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      مشاركة: Please, Dad

      Wow .. excellent work nakash ..I truelly liked it ..keep on the good work
      شكر خاص للأخ Mista koo على التوقيع الرائع ..
      Was I ever right
      In wantin' to lay down beside, all the dreaming
      I think that I'll stand up with all my might

      And take my chances
      All the while, all the while
      You're bitter sweet and full of favors
      Just beggin' to take the chance

      In a way, I was demanding
      Glad that I'm grounded
      Cause all I ever wanna be, is free


      by, Remy Shand

    4. #4
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      مشاركة: Please, Dad

      oh my God
      amazing
      so much amazing
      incredible
      very very very very beautiful words dear brother
      i liked them sooooo much
      they just touh the heart
      one's father-specially girls- is the most important aspect in life
      let me say it here
      im so proud of my father
      and i love him soooooo much
      May Allah bless him

      thank u Nakash for this poem
      it really deserves an

      سبحان الله و الحمد لله و لا اله الا الله و الله أكبر
      لا اله الا انت سبحانك اني كنت من الظالمين

    5. #5
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      26-01-2005
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      مشاركة: Please, Dad

      اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the duke
      woooooooooooooooooooooooow



      INCREDIBLE poem
      that's the best for u.... i can't describe how much i liked it
      it's rhymed and a great topic and excellent expression
      CONGRATULATION


      BEST REGARDS


      THE DUKE
      thanks dude 4 ur big wow

      thanks for posting and supporting me
      it really means alot of someone posting here

      تحياتي..........(نكاش روس)

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      مشاركة: Please, Dad

      [QUOTE=blank] Wow .. excellent work nakash ..I truelly liked it ..keep on the good work [/QUOTE

      thanks dear for posting and fortunatily u liked it

      تحياتي.......(نكاش روس)

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      مشاركة: Please, Dad

      oh my God
      amazing
      so much amazing
      incredible
      very very very very beautiful words dear brother
      i liked them sooooo much

      thanks sister for ur soft words
      iam sure u can do much better than me

      they just touh the heart


      i dont really know wut r u meaning by touh

      one's father-specially girls- is the most important aspect in life
      let me say it here
      im so proud of my father
      and i love him soooooo much
      May Allah bless him
      good for u>>>>>> ur dad is a lucky man



      thank u Nakash for this poem


      ur welcome sister



      thanks alots for ur kindness
      for ur voting
      and for being nice





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